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they say: “I wanted to keep the look authentic to Zazie and really showcase her natural texture.” “Zazie’s hair for her first Oscars was inspired by Eartha Kitt,” Redway said,
writer: in her own words explains more about the inspiration of her hair style and what she used for it.
introduce: the writer introduced it by basically saying how she is the model of the hair that the stylist created. She was show casing the product the stylist used for the Oscars.
Explain? Yes, she explains how Zazie already has a naturally curly hair texture and that the Stylist wanted to really show that off and make it look elegant for the Oscars.
Suggest: I would maybe suggest a tad. it more detail but other than that everything is solid.
